Summer

Deng Xiaozhong

Summer arrived, I with respect to too impatient to wait eat ice cream and travel, bathe cold water. Summer is very hot, I do not eat 10 ice cream one day to be able to be heated up dead by summer. Our teacher takes stone to give us today, we do 9 idiom. I and yellow Xin eaves, Li Yan a group, I and yellow Xin eaves did a lot of idiom, li Yan was done very few, we a group finish the first times 9 idiom, I am very happy today, I like summer.

Judge: The language is clear and coherent.

Summer

Fang Zhaoyi

In this one summer, I learn to write a composition in composition class.

In the house of this white wall, we pile stone in this place, go searching many a stone in a pouch, final pitch on the roundest the biggest stone.

I piled a penguin, but the again and again is flat, rose again again. I had piled up it finally. Call a teacher to look immediately, but the teacher does not come tardy, when I am disappointed, the teacher came however.

My penguin was patted finally.

Judge: Keep the business that was clear that oneself had been experienced, this game of summer is interesting! I love summerHuang XinyuSummer arrived, a lot of people played to the outside. Summer is very hot, everybody wears very few dress, besides fool ability can wear a lot of dresses. Summer can swim, eat ice-lolly and bathe cold water to wait. For instance, a few days ago very hot, I ate a few ice-lolly and a few ice to stimulate drench. Eat so that my mouth resembles iced mouth. For instance, very hot yesterday, and I went cinema. I gave kubla khah, after coming home, I bathed, after be being washed, I feel very cool. Next I slept. I love summer! Judge: It is to like summer really, ability can be written so sentiently.

I love summerHuang XinyuSummer arrived, a lot of people played to the outside. Summer is very hot, everybody wears very few dress, besides fool ability can wear a lot of dresses. Summer can swim, eat ice-lolly and bathe cold water to wait. For instance, a few days ago very hot, I ate a few ice-lolly and a few ice to stimulate drench. Eat so that my mouth resembles iced mouth. For instance, very hot yesterday, and I went cinema. I gave kubla khah, after coming home, I bathed, after be being washed, I feel very cool. Next I slept. I love summer! Judge: It is to like summer really, ability can be written so sentiently.

I love summer

Huang Xinyu

Summer arrived, a lot of people played to the outside. Summer is very hot, everybody wears very few dress, besides fool ability can wear a lot of dresses. Summer can swim, eat ice-lolly and bathe cold water to wait.

For instance, a few days ago very hot, I ate a few ice-lolly and a few ice to stimulate drench. Eat so that my mouth resembles iced mouth.

For instance, very hot yesterday, and I went cinema. I gave kubla khah, after coming home, I bathed, after be being washed, I feel very cool. Next I slept.

I love summer!

Judge: It is to like summer really, ability can be written so sentiently.